I have to admit the overall...low bit distortion? I'm not sure...is distracting. Is it just on the piano? I think. It just fills in the space between the notes and it feels like something between me and the mix. If it is a low bit distortion maybe raise it to 12 bits? If not, ignore that advice.
That aside the drums are powerful. Maybe inappropriately so but I like them too much and I'm biased. The vocal is a bit harsh on occasion when he really pushes but that's minor and I'm over analyzing.
I will say that, that effect aside it sounds fine. But this song needs something more than that. It's a subtle song and it needs to be a subtle song with a knife in it's belt. Safe but threatening. Does that help? Probably not. Still, I stand by my vague analogies because there's nothing technical to complain about and after that, critiquing art is tiresome. 7 thumbs up.
That aside the drums are powerful. Maybe inappropriately so but I like them too much and I'm biased. The vocal is a bit harsh on occasion when he really pushes but that's minor and I'm over analyzing.
I will say that, that effect aside it sounds fine. But this song needs something more than that. It's a subtle song and it needs to be a subtle song with a knife in it's belt. Safe but threatening. Does that help? Probably not. Still, I stand by my vague analogies because there's nothing technical to complain about and after that, critiquing art is tiresome. 7 thumbs up.