02-11-2019, 06:52 PM
Hmm, it's a bit confusing to listen for me. Sounds like you tried hard to make every element equally listenable. I think one have to make clear decisions what in a certain part is the first instrument and what are the supporting elements in order to create a vibe and lead the listener through the event without confusingif you no what I mean. Don't get me wrong it's not a bad mix but to me it needs more of a statement, a listening direction.
Cheers!
Cheers!