06-09-2021, 03:33 PM
I listened to the 2nd version. Sounds good! A couple things:
- Guitars during loud/chorus parts sound a bit quiet and muddy
- I hear some pumping in the drums that is a bit fatiguing
- Mix overall could use a bit less 200-400hz and some more air instead
- At the section where the singer says “i used to dance in my dreams…”, the guitars are really masking the vocal
- Snare sounds a bit boxy/papery