22-04-2019, 10:59 AM
Hey Zloyer - I really like the space you put around the drums. Instrumentally, this mix is pretty cool.
The vocals are where most of the work is needed: More "polishing" - At present the vocals sound a bit buried and dull; a little "lo-fi". Particularly in the verses, the lead vocal is a bit unstable in level, so more stages of compression may be needed, and/or automation to really even things out and make every syllable audible. Try cleaning the vocals up with eq and brightening them a little. The vocals are also lisping, I'm guessing due to over-de-essing, so you should definitely look at that too.
Nice start!
The vocals are where most of the work is needed: More "polishing" - At present the vocals sound a bit buried and dull; a little "lo-fi". Particularly in the verses, the lead vocal is a bit unstable in level, so more stages of compression may be needed, and/or automation to really even things out and make every syllable audible. Try cleaning the vocals up with eq and brightening them a little. The vocals are also lisping, I'm guessing due to over-de-essing, so you should definitely look at that too.
Nice start!
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