Any feedback (first mix)

[lmat]

Dangerous is right on. You can't make a smoothe and flowey saxophone line from a recording that is dry and separated. You'll have to work more with what you have instead of against it.

Reverb may help smoothe off the edges of the sound you're hearing; maybe try a large-room impulse response reverb?

The balance is good, but the overall levels are a bit low.

Good work and welcome to mixing!