29-08-2018, 02:42 PM
Hey Kirk,
great "vibe". I really like the way everything meshes together, the drums in particular.
But the electric guitar is a bit distracting, I would like it in the middle or at least toward the center. I feel it carries a important role in the song. I love the tone btw.
I do think the sibilance on the vocal is a problem. I think I also hear some artifacts from possible vocal tuning. Sounds like the mid-range in the vox needs a bit more work.
The keys and toy piano however are fine to my ears.
Background vocals could "blend" a little more into the arrangment. A little-less high-end or just a bit quieter?
Cheers,
Lukas
great "vibe". I really like the way everything meshes together, the drums in particular.
But the electric guitar is a bit distracting, I would like it in the middle or at least toward the center. I feel it carries a important role in the song. I love the tone btw.
I do think the sibilance on the vocal is a problem. I think I also hear some artifacts from possible vocal tuning. Sounds like the mid-range in the vox needs a bit more work.
The keys and toy piano however are fine to my ears.
Background vocals could "blend" a little more into the arrangment. A little-less high-end or just a bit quieter?
Cheers,
Lukas