I took some of James' notes on this tune and ran with it. This ballad needs to be treated gently, so I used the lyrics to tell me when to introduce instruments. The song opens with only acoustic guitars and the the vocals. At bar 12 I brought in the pedal steel guitar. With the next mention of Eliza Jane, at about bar 17, I brought in the bass. To emphasize the "rain", I brought in mandolin 1 at bar 24. The drums come in about bar 42, and lastly the organ about bar 49. I think its arranged more like James might want.
Peace,
Dave
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Dave
Mid 2019 Mac Pro; Focusrite Scarlet 18i20 USB2 audio interface; Logic Pro X; FabFilter C2, DS, L1, Q3, R, Saturn2, Timeless2 ; Native Instruments Komplete 13; Waves 12 Gold; Rokit 6 G3 monitors; AKG K240 MKII and Beyerdynamic DT990 Pro cans.