At 1:12 there's a big jump in overall level that took me by surprise, and then at 1:41 the level drops again. You use this several times moving from verse into chorus. The bass guitar distortion may be a tad too high, where I used an "edge" sound common to other progressive rock bass players. Nice interpretation.
Peace,
Dave
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Dave
Mid 2019 Mac Pro; Focusrite Scarlet 18i20 USB2 audio interface; Logic Pro X; FabFilter C2, DS, L1, Q3, R, Saturn2, Timeless2 ; Native Instruments Komplete 13; Waves 12 Gold; Rokit 6 G3 monitors; AKG K240 MKII and Beyerdynamic DT990 Pro cans.