Dead Roses - Crownoise

[LukasL]

I would say this is pretty good and only has a few aspects which could be better:

Good:
- Levels, Panning and Dynamics
- Vocal FX

Could be improved:
- EXTREME high-frequency domination of the mix
-> hiss and harsh sounds
- Slightly muffeld vocal (male)

I would suggest you take a look at your EQ Moves again, all of this is just my opinion and hopefully helpful critisism