08-05-2017, 12:50 PM
Hey !
This one is not easy. Verses and choruses are totally different and tell different points of view : atrocities and horror of the world war II in the verses and hope, duty and memories in the choruses. This duality should be felt with ambiant verses and explosive and powerful choruses.
Based on that, I think your verses are too similar to your choruses. Try using different reverbs for example or play with automation to bring life in the choruses.
Overall, you have some masking between the kick and bass and too much 100-200 Hz in general. Make sure you reference against pro mastered song (we like some Creed or Alterbridge for overall feeling) to make sure your EQ moves are done in the right way. Unless you have a calibrated room with awesome speakers, it's impossible not to reference.
Keep it up !
This one is not easy. Verses and choruses are totally different and tell different points of view : atrocities and horror of the world war II in the verses and hope, duty and memories in the choruses. This duality should be felt with ambiant verses and explosive and powerful choruses.
Based on that, I think your verses are too similar to your choruses. Try using different reverbs for example or play with automation to bring life in the choruses.
Overall, you have some masking between the kick and bass and too much 100-200 Hz in general. Make sure you reference against pro mastered song (we like some Creed or Alterbridge for overall feeling) to make sure your EQ moves are done in the right way. Unless you have a calibrated room with awesome speakers, it's impossible not to reference.
Keep it up !