Hey TiPa,
I compared your mix with the entombed sound, and yeah it was pretty close.
Your guitars are maybe more mushy than entombed's, and the snare needs more impact and clarity, as the vocals do too.
I'd back off overheads a bit, too.
Otherwise, some resonant frequencies in the 130-180 area needs more control, that's where guitars and bass are fighting.
Aside from that, it sounded not so bad (and way better than my try).
I compared your mix with the entombed sound, and yeah it was pretty close.
Your guitars are maybe more mushy than entombed's, and the snare needs more impact and clarity, as the vocals do too.
I'd back off overheads a bit, too.
Otherwise, some resonant frequencies in the 130-180 area needs more control, that's where guitars and bass are fighting.
Aside from that, it sounded not so bad (and way better than my try).