An unusual "high risk" mix

[Artbass]

You definitly improved it. It sounds more together than in your first version. It still sounds a bit muffled though. I think a bit more "air" would do your mix some good and (pardon the pun) let it breath more. As it is right now I get the impression that the only high frequencies come from the cymbals.

Anyway, for my ears you're definitly moving into the right direction.