23-02-2017, 07:17 PM
It's not bad. I know you went for a more natural sound but I think the samples would have helped. It's not a natural song. Relying on the claps for the backbeat feels a little weak. The snare sample may have reinforced the center of the stereo image a bit more.
Overall the vocals feel a little low. I know that was you intention in the chorus and it makes sense but they do get a little lost. Maybe filtering them in a way so they stand out more but still sound overwhelmed by the chorus. A low mid cut might help.
The kick feels good. The guitars seem ok. No issues there. The guitar on the right in the verse may be a little heavy.
The bridge is cool. I like the vocal delay.
Overall its a good mix. There are minor issues here and there but as a song it works. I think there could be more focus on the vocals which would appeal to the casual listener.
Overall the vocals feel a little low. I know that was you intention in the chorus and it makes sense but they do get a little lost. Maybe filtering them in a way so they stand out more but still sound overwhelmed by the chorus. A low mid cut might help.
The kick feels good. The guitars seem ok. No issues there. The guitar on the right in the verse may be a little heavy.
The bridge is cool. I like the vocal delay.
Overall its a good mix. There are minor issues here and there but as a song it works. I think there could be more focus on the vocals which would appeal to the casual listener.