Hi dude! I do not consider myself an expert, but I will say something.
I think the vocals for this genre are too far away and other instruments interfere with it.
Such a variant of mixing would be suitable for electronic music, where vocals are not the main instrument, but in this case it is a song and it should be heard without strain of hearing.
I repeat, I am not a connoisseur, I am also studying)) But I liked the instrumental) If you want to criticize my version and do not be shy in expressions)) Good luck))
I think the vocals for this genre are too far away and other instruments interfere with it.
Such a variant of mixing would be suitable for electronic music, where vocals are not the main instrument, but in this case it is a song and it should be heard without strain of hearing.
I repeat, I am not a connoisseur, I am also studying)) But I liked the instrumental) If you want to criticize my version and do not be shy in expressions)) Good luck))