Here is my mix of this song.

[Pedaling Prince]

This is my first attempt at all of this. I've dabbled in it from time to time but not seriously.

For someone who only "dabbles" you do very good quality work.

Only complaints here really are that the stereo image seems a little narrow (you might try spreading the instruments across the stereo field a little more overall) and the vocal is maybe a dB or two too loud.

Sounds to me like you should do more than "dabble."