11-07-2016, 12:20 PM
Welcome gilangpm,
Great intro and build!
I really like what you have done with the instruments and arrangement. Sounds exciting listening with headphones and has "indie" written all over it. I feel the vocals could do with some more work. For me they're too heavy in the low mids and are sounding too big and loud for the style you have gone with. In essence they sound like they are sitting on top and not jelling with the mix. Maybe a softer airy tone to suit that great vibe you've already got going.
Dave
Great intro and build!
I really like what you have done with the instruments and arrangement. Sounds exciting listening with headphones and has "indie" written all over it. I feel the vocals could do with some more work. For me they're too heavy in the low mids and are sounding too big and loud for the style you have gone with. In essence they sound like they are sitting on top and not jelling with the mix. Maybe a softer airy tone to suit that great vibe you've already got going.
Dave