guitars have too much lowend (or is it the bass - hard to tell?). everything sounds a bit muffled, like someone put a sheet over the speakers. hard to hear small details like the tom fill at 0:47 as well as very important things like the double bass throughout the whole song.
Pro tipp: Solo guitars are meant to be placed in the middle of the mix if there is no voice. THEY are the voice at that moment so to say so you have to treat them like vocals.
The mix itself is very compact and powerful but thats because there is too much stuff buried under the guitars and vocals. you need waaaay more separation between the drums, bass, guitars and vocals plus more attention to detail to bring this mix up to a commercial level
Pro tipp: Solo guitars are meant to be placed in the middle of the mix if there is no voice. THEY are the voice at that moment so to say so you have to treat them like vocals.
The mix itself is very compact and powerful but thats because there is too much stuff buried under the guitars and vocals. you need waaaay more separation between the drums, bass, guitars and vocals plus more attention to detail to bring this mix up to a commercial level