18-06-2020, 12:19 AM
I'm in a bad mood as I've stated in a previous post. You misspelled "Jacks" in the file and I'm livid. Be prepared....
It's fine. Generally pretty good. I say this a lot but it could "breathe" more. I wish the chorus opened up more but I always say that. Nothing's offensive though. Let me listen again...
I really like the intro. I don't know why it falls off and I'm not sure it's a mix issue.
I feel like the vocal loses steam. And it's the nature of the part. He hits and pushes the top of the sections and kind of resolves and I think the last parts of sections tend to fall back a bit too much.
The tonal balance pretty much works. It feels like a song. It could move me more. I can't tell you how or why. It feels like a song that needs help in the mix. Maybe its the general guitar pedal and the staccato bass.
I get this all isn't all that helpful. There's just not much to complain about but it could inspire the listener more so it's in that nebulous area. But I won't lie and say it's great. I warned you that I was in a bad mood.
It's fine. Generally pretty good. I say this a lot but it could "breathe" more. I wish the chorus opened up more but I always say that. Nothing's offensive though. Let me listen again...
I really like the intro. I don't know why it falls off and I'm not sure it's a mix issue.
I feel like the vocal loses steam. And it's the nature of the part. He hits and pushes the top of the sections and kind of resolves and I think the last parts of sections tend to fall back a bit too much.
The tonal balance pretty much works. It feels like a song. It could move me more. I can't tell you how or why. It feels like a song that needs help in the mix. Maybe its the general guitar pedal and the staccato bass.
I get this all isn't all that helpful. There's just not much to complain about but it could inspire the listener more so it's in that nebulous area. But I won't lie and say it's great. I warned you that I was in a bad mood.
It doesn't have to sound good. People just need to think it sounds good.