23-03-2020, 03:32 AM
I think it could use more drums. Especially considering there's no bass until the first chorus it feels a little empty. They feel in the background compared to the synths. I want to say the synths feel loud but that's all there really is at the start besides the drums and it feels like the drums should come up to support the synths as opposed to the synths being brought down.
The bass feels fine.
The verse vocals work. The chorus vocals are a bit buried compared to the verse. They should come up to match the verse vocal but all to help give the chorus a lift. I'm a fan of panning things wide but I think the chorus vocals might work better centered or panned slightly. They also get masked by the guitars. They would anchor the center of the image and give them their own sonic real-estate.
I think that's it. It feels like overall it could use more "oomph"
The bass feels fine.
The verse vocals work. The chorus vocals are a bit buried compared to the verse. They should come up to match the verse vocal but all to help give the chorus a lift. I'm a fan of panning things wide but I think the chorus vocals might work better centered or panned slightly. They also get masked by the guitars. They would anchor the center of the image and give them their own sonic real-estate.
I think that's it. It feels like overall it could use more "oomph"
It doesn't have to sound good. People just need to think it sounds good.