Jims Mix

[Roy]

It sounds really good. Everything is well balanced tonally. I'd say the drums sound really good but I think could use a little space to help tie them together and make them gel. Maybe more snare? It feels a little too laid back. I go back and forth about the guitar. Sometimes it feels loud and sometimes it feels ok. I know the part already has some volume changes on its own. There's something about the overall sound of it that feels too...wide? There feels like there's a stereo effect or processing that blurs its image. Especially in the distorted sections. There are just times when I have trouble placing it in a point in space. It's not even much of a critique, just an observation. I could use more keyboards. Conversely, they seem too centered and get lost in the crowded center. I think panning some things (cymbals and keys) out more in general may help.

All that said it does sound really good and all of that is minor. It's fun to listen to. Good job.