01-03-2020, 03:36 PM
I have to agree with Wizzards. It lacks cohesion. That's mostly the recording's fault since it's a lot of samples and DI parts. I think the vocal gets lost at times, especially in the louder sections. The snare verb feels weird. It could work in some songs but in this arrangement it accentuates the 'fakeness' of the drums and I'm not sure this song needs the attention called to the drums. The distortion on the bass can be a detriment when the bass is more exposed. It feels a little kazoo like.
It feels like a 'mix' and not a song. If that makes sense. It's not far off but needs a little more focus.
It feels like a 'mix' and not a song. If that makes sense. It's not far off but needs a little more focus.
It doesn't have to sound good. People just need to think it sounds good.