27-11-2019, 10:00 PM
Hey, not bad!
This one is not quite as easy as one might expect (well, I didn’t think so anyway). You are right that it's fun though.
Little things I didn’t like so much. Might be a bit too nit-picky, and down to personal taste - but it’s what sprang to mind as I played it through:
I miss the guitar solo in the chorus parts, it’s a little too buried in there for me I feel.
I think overall perhaps vocal could be a touch brighter? Not sure.
The ‘your my hero’ part in the bridge. Personal taste, it’s just too cheesy for me! Good effort giving it a go fitting in though!
Kick gets a bit lost for me.
Saying that, I enjoyed the listen overall. Oh, forgot to mention, I think you have the organ part working well with the piano.
Well done.
Cheers!
This one is not quite as easy as one might expect (well, I didn’t think so anyway). You are right that it's fun though.
Little things I didn’t like so much. Might be a bit too nit-picky, and down to personal taste - but it’s what sprang to mind as I played it through:
I miss the guitar solo in the chorus parts, it’s a little too buried in there for me I feel.
I think overall perhaps vocal could be a touch brighter? Not sure.
The ‘your my hero’ part in the bridge. Personal taste, it’s just too cheesy for me! Good effort giving it a go fitting in though!
Kick gets a bit lost for me.
Saying that, I enjoyed the listen overall. Oh, forgot to mention, I think you have the organ part working well with the piano.
Well done.
Cheers!
Just uploaded a mix/master? Waiting for comments? Why not give back and critique a mix/master, or two!