Ok y'all,
I've tried to take many of your suggestions and here is my second attempt. I tried to approach this from more of a rock and roll perspective. I'm frustrated with the piano: it sounds dull and listless and doesn't sit well in the mix (which is one reason I had pushed it down in the previous attempt). Any suggestions? Anyway, Thanks for all the critiques and suggestions so far; keep 'em coming!
I've tried to take many of your suggestions and here is my second attempt. I tried to approach this from more of a rock and roll perspective. I'm frustrated with the piano: it sounds dull and listless and doesn't sit well in the mix (which is one reason I had pushed it down in the previous attempt). Any suggestions? Anyway, Thanks for all the critiques and suggestions so far; keep 'em coming!