12-09-2019, 01:51 PM
On a quick listen, it feels good. The guitars can be harsh at times and occasionally overshadow the vocals. I think the bass sound could be more interesting. There's not much going on in the song so it really has to help keep the listener's interest. There could be more separation between the verse and choruses. It feels dynamically a little flat overall (it's the arrangement) so it needs some help punctuating those sections.
I think that's all.
I think that's all.
It doesn't have to sound good. People just need to think it sounds good.