09-08-2013, 07:46 PM
First off the first chord is not played fully here, the onset is missing.
I'm really liking the vocal tone here. Perpaps by keeping the rest of the music very easy (not supercharging everything) give the vocals lot of space. In rap music I think it's OK to keep the vocal so forefront that it almost disconnects from the rest of the music. You hear that quite a lot in this kind of genre.
The kick would need little more low end impact. However in this mix the best solution for such would be to add some of your own kick drums.
I'm feeling a tiny drop in drive when the chorus (after first verse) hits; the lead vocals are bit quieter than the verse rapping. Also adding little bit sparkle to them (perhaps some delay) might not hurt.
I'm really liking the vocal tone here. Perpaps by keeping the rest of the music very easy (not supercharging everything) give the vocals lot of space. In rap music I think it's OK to keep the vocal so forefront that it almost disconnects from the rest of the music. You hear that quite a lot in this kind of genre.
The kick would need little more low end impact. However in this mix the best solution for such would be to add some of your own kick drums.
I'm feeling a tiny drop in drive when the chorus (after first verse) hits; the lead vocals are bit quieter than the verse rapping. Also adding little bit sparkle to them (perhaps some delay) might not hurt.