Mix - Ripe

[Txory]

Two things that stand out to me.
voice midrange is very full. I'd scoop the voice more to clean it up.
Drums feel very dry and lifeless.. sounds like you are only using the kick and snare only. I'd recommend you bring up the overheads more up front.

Mix can definitely benefit from highpass filters everywhere that sub low end is not needed. I usually put a highpass on pretty much everything. even bass. 20 and 30hz aren't a necessity so I usually highpass a lot of things.

Hope this helps.
keep it up!

Thanks for the feedback.

I already improved a mix, I would like to know your opinion about the new mix

best regards