04-08-2013, 07:56 AM
Hi,
could you please make a habbit out of just using one thread per mix? That makes judging different mixes of the same song a bit easier and helps people refer back to their comments more easily.
Now, to give you some feedback:
Nice idea with the intro guitars.
You should take care with the doubled (? - stereo at least) vocals. The sibiliances get out of hand right from the start. The rather harsh tonality you chose to give them does emphazise it even more. That tonality itself seems to work, but you should watch out for those side effects.
Cheers
Artbass
could you please make a habbit out of just using one thread per mix? That makes judging different mixes of the same song a bit easier and helps people refer back to their comments more easily.
Now, to give you some feedback:
Nice idea with the intro guitars.
You should take care with the doubled (? - stereo at least) vocals. The sibiliances get out of hand right from the start. The rather harsh tonality you chose to give them does emphazise it even more. That tonality itself seems to work, but you should watch out for those side effects.
Cheers
Artbass