So, here's my mix with a quick (and slightly over compressed) master.

[crissmichaels]

Aaaaaaand now the more I listen to it, I'm realizing the melody guitars are a little too much. I'll fix that (most likely just a level issue) and update accordingly. I'm back at work, so it'll be about a week or so.

Also, in the new mix, I turned the snare sample down. It wasn't really needed, but I kept it in at a low level. Different textures are always nice.