02-04-2019, 06:18 PM
I think the balances work well overall. My major thought is that in trying to get some vibe and excitement you might have over done it. The vocal is fairly unaffected which I think works but I think the BGVs might go too far in the other direction. Keeping all or some of those tracks 'sweeter' might create more of a contrast with the other, more aggressive sounds. I like the filtered vocal at the end. It may get a little harsh at times.
It doesn't have to sound good. People just need to think it sounds good.