10-02-2019, 12:13 AM
I only listened to version 5. The rhythm section feels pretty mono. I think I get what you're going for, having the stereo parts jump out out more to create excitement but I think you could still do that moving things out more and creating more space for the parts. It could be bigger overall. It's a good start and I like your intent but I think you can push it more.
It doesn't have to sound good. People just need to think it sounds good.