21-01-2019, 02:51 AM
very nice mix....drums sound great! As do the guitar and vox.
for me the ambience is a bit confused ..... big slap on vox, huge dry snare .... each good in their own right but together maybe not so good. I think the fact that you've left the vocal intro to the song intact with the slap back in its full glory kinda sets the scene for a live sound and then the big snare hits....and it seems dry.
i'd also question the balance of the organ during the middle section.....the guitar for the most part is playing the same part over and over whilst the keys are going "Ham" on the melody.....but i can hardly hear it. Maybe some automation could help both the guitar and keys shine.
Both these points are stylistic choices and I offer them as food for thought. Good job.
Cheers
for me the ambience is a bit confused ..... big slap on vox, huge dry snare .... each good in their own right but together maybe not so good. I think the fact that you've left the vocal intro to the song intact with the slap back in its full glory kinda sets the scene for a live sound and then the big snare hits....and it seems dry.
i'd also question the balance of the organ during the middle section.....the guitar for the most part is playing the same part over and over whilst the keys are going "Ham" on the melody.....but i can hardly hear it. Maybe some automation could help both the guitar and keys shine.
Both these points are stylistic choices and I offer them as food for thought. Good job.
Cheers
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