15-01-2019, 10:40 AM
Hi 3ee! Here are the main issues that occurred to me:
Like that version a lot -- gets us off to a flying start! Thanks for getting involved 3ee!
- Nice laid-back vibe overall, but it doesn't demand the listener's attention as much as I'd expect of a single. Whether you want to address that with arrangement or automation is up to you.
- Generally very solid balancing, and tasteful effects. Like the solo-guitar delay particularly.
- The small-speaker bass translation could be better.
- The rhythm guitar and lead vox are both quite ambient, ie. the reverb feels a bit too obvious. Is it too bright?
- Cymbal crashes a bit harsh in the midrange. From the middle-section onwards, I felt they conflicted a bit with the the lead vocal
- The rising guitar line leading into the outro section feels a bit edgy tonally. I think it's some resonances in the 2-3kHz region.
Like that version a lot -- gets us off to a flying start! Thanks for getting involved 3ee!