Okk here is the living in the city ;)

[Deliza]

Everything seems pretty fine, but that buf fat ass kick! It's too muddy and booming, going against the pule of the tune, slowing it down. Bass sounds fine, but it could use some more midrange presence and that kick is like a veil over it. 15 minutes working on that kickdrum would make this tenfold better, just restrain that boom. Could it be a monitoring issue, something in your room?

Beside that, everything is just a matter of taste. Organ is just too much for me while vocals could use some more bite, but each of those sounds good. And the drums (minus that kick) sound pretty good, too!