The hard panning on some instruments irks me, especially with the 2nd acoustic guitar. Also, I would ease up on the reverb but I guess that is mostly a style or artistic choice, is it not?
Most mixes done in Reaper or Bitwig on a MacBook Pro using Sony MDR-7506 headphones and some hifi system with old Saba speakers in a small-ish untreated room. If I commented on your mix, please check the board for my mix and reciprocate. :) Thank you!