18-02-2018, 07:42 PM
Hey Simon,
you pulled of this one very nicely.
I would bring up the bass up a tiny bit. I'd say the drums could have a bit more power in the chorus. I know the verses are pretty "soft" style wise, but the chorus could use a more "epic" drum sound.
Also the vocals sound a bit bottom-heavy in the choruses (in the sides especially). If this was you and you did your double track an octave lower, then I would pull this track down a bit. Overall I feel the vocals could come back 3db to let music shine a bit more.
One last thing, I think the panned percussive elements sound nice but are a bit distracting from the vocal and other parts. Maybe just turn them down, or pull out a bit of 2.5khZ and LP them for a softer sound? This just preference of course.
To be honest, this really is nitpicking and I could imagine this song and mix playing on the radio(meant as a compliment, lol). Very well done!
Cheers,
Lukas
you pulled of this one very nicely.
I would bring up the bass up a tiny bit. I'd say the drums could have a bit more power in the chorus. I know the verses are pretty "soft" style wise, but the chorus could use a more "epic" drum sound.
Also the vocals sound a bit bottom-heavy in the choruses (in the sides especially). If this was you and you did your double track an octave lower, then I would pull this track down a bit. Overall I feel the vocals could come back 3db to let music shine a bit more.
One last thing, I think the panned percussive elements sound nice but are a bit distracting from the vocal and other parts. Maybe just turn them down, or pull out a bit of 2.5khZ and LP them for a softer sound? This just preference of course.
To be honest, this really is nitpicking and I could imagine this song and mix playing on the radio(meant as a compliment, lol). Very well done!
Cheers,
Lukas