Hard Mixing....

[Mixinthecloud]

I think you could be even more aggressive. All of your sounds are spot on. The mix is hard because there is a lot going on and things trying to grab the spotlight in almost every measure. All of them competing for space in the sound filed. And it doesn't help that there is a preponderance of low mids on vocals and electric guitars the taming of which detracts from the expression of the song. You've done a pretty good job of taming the low-mid build up and the vocals are smooth and round. Finding the right environment to stick this in is also a bit of a challenge considering the complex content. Every reads nicely in the environment you built. Well done.