18-07-2017, 09:51 AM
Hi Simon,
Epic Indeed!!!
To my ears, this is a competent mix. I like the way you have handled the sonics and emotion from start to finish. Great play with the synths!
Just a couple of things jumped out at me whist listening. I think the first vocal passage could be a little hot or maybe too up front. I wonder if a softer entry would work better. I think it would also help the build into the first vocal harmony part which as it is, for me is a little underwhelming following on. The vocal passages there on for me, work well. The only other thing I feel is to perhaps exploit the stereo field more with some creativity and crazy panning, "if you like", through some of the mysterious sonic passages that are presented here, just to make things more Epic!
Great work here. Enjoyable listening
Dave
Epic Indeed!!!
To my ears, this is a competent mix. I like the way you have handled the sonics and emotion from start to finish. Great play with the synths!
Just a couple of things jumped out at me whist listening. I think the first vocal passage could be a little hot or maybe too up front. I wonder if a softer entry would work better. I think it would also help the build into the first vocal harmony part which as it is, for me is a little underwhelming following on. The vocal passages there on for me, work well. The only other thing I feel is to perhaps exploit the stereo field more with some creativity and crazy panning, "if you like", through some of the mysterious sonic passages that are presented here, just to make things more Epic!
Great work here. Enjoyable listening
Dave