22-02-2017, 04:07 PM
It sounds good. Especially the drums. Overall it feels a little too "atmospheric" and wide.
I think the reverb and effects on the vocal "blurs" it and takes the focus away from the vocal. Especially with the stereo spread on the guitar my ear wants a more solid, centered, drier vocal to help offset the space of the guitar. Maybe save the effects for the background vocals in the chorus. I think the vocal effects are cool in the outro.
Other than that my only thought is the bass could be a little more defined and a hair louder to anchor the center of the image and compete with the guitars. Maybe a slight subtle distortion to sharpen it some more.
I hope that all makes sense. I'm terrible at explaining things.
Overall it's really good. The drums sound great.
I think the reverb and effects on the vocal "blurs" it and takes the focus away from the vocal. Especially with the stereo spread on the guitar my ear wants a more solid, centered, drier vocal to help offset the space of the guitar. Maybe save the effects for the background vocals in the chorus. I think the vocal effects are cool in the outro.
Other than that my only thought is the bass could be a little more defined and a hair louder to anchor the center of the image and compete with the guitars. Maybe a slight subtle distortion to sharpen it some more.
I hope that all makes sense. I'm terrible at explaining things.
Overall it's really good. The drums sound great.
It doesn't have to sound good. People just need to think it sounds good.