Dark Ride - Burning Bridges (first ever mix)

[Richard Hayward]

In general.
the best thing you can do is to compare your mix with a reference track you really like. In this case for example from the band Dragonforce.
First listen to a track of dragonforce and after then compare it with yours.
Then you will notice the difference and understand where the weak points are.
It is always good using a reference track. not only for mastering but also for mixing.
You can also check the frequency spectrum of your song with a graphic EQ and compare it with your reference track.

Thank you very much for expanding. Very new to this and really appreciate your feedback and suggestions. Gonna try and mix another song and will try using a reference track to compare to! Cheers!