20-11-2016, 02:20 PM
I think Roy.. is correct in the hurried vocal delivery, maybe something moved during mixing (it happens). The vocal is coming in just before the downbeat.
The bottom snare is killing your snare tops body and attack.
The mix sounds pretty cool, but given the style of this song, I think the overly saturated vocal loses its appeal really quick. There are times when I can't distinguish the tail of the distorted vocal with the sound of the electric guitar. IMO
Your mix has two sides (regarding frequency spectrum) Bass and Air.
There is a lack of body which is hurting the depth of your mix.
Try bringing some the mid range detail back to some of your instruments or shelving the 8 to 10k region on you stringed instruments. Perhaps, just improving your bass guitar may even help with this issue.
I think you mix is a solid beginning towards something great.
The bottom snare is killing your snare tops body and attack.
The mix sounds pretty cool, but given the style of this song, I think the overly saturated vocal loses its appeal really quick. There are times when I can't distinguish the tail of the distorted vocal with the sound of the electric guitar. IMO
Your mix has two sides (regarding frequency spectrum) Bass and Air.
There is a lack of body which is hurting the depth of your mix.
Try bringing some the mid range detail back to some of your instruments or shelving the 8 to 10k region on you stringed instruments. Perhaps, just improving your bass guitar may even help with this issue.
I think you mix is a solid beginning towards something great.
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"One often learns more from ten days of agony than ten years of contentment."
Pro Tools 12.6/Studio One 3 Pro
Studiolive 16 Series III
Yamaha HS5/HS8
Console 1