10-08-2016, 10:39 AM
Hi Ulakin, and welcome here 
I agree with Konek, your snare lacks some depth and punch. You probably should use some samples to enhance it.
Your drums are pretty bright with a lot of attack. You should set your compressors with a faster attack and a short release to emphasized the sustain.
Finally, some automation could be efficient to deal with the volume in the different sections (vocals are too loud in the last part for example).
Otherwise, that's a very promising start ! Keep it up
I agree with Konek, your snare lacks some depth and punch. You probably should use some samples to enhance it.
Your drums are pretty bright with a lot of attack. You should set your compressors with a faster attack and a short release to emphasized the sustain.
Finally, some automation could be efficient to deal with the volume in the different sections (vocals are too loud in the last part for example).
Otherwise, that's a very promising start ! Keep it up