NovavOne "Four Graham - Mixed by konop

[konop_tnt]

Hi.

I only listened to version 2. I find the guitars very thin. They deserve more fatness and presence (and drums and bass are not really in place, they need a lot of edition to be on the grid).
The low ends are not well defined, mostly because of the bass which takes too much place. Once you identified the bass, you can't get rid of it for the whole song.

To my humble opinion, you should focus on the relationship between kick and bass and then with the guitars to make sure each has a specific range of frequencies.

I've mixed it on headphones so that is the reason of poor levels