06-04-2016, 02:25 PM
I'm glad you enjoyed the song, Kurt!
You did a great job with it IMHO. It sounds good to me overall, great tones and balance.
A few things that you might have done to make it even better:
- I think the LPF on the bass is too much, perhaps a high shelf would have been enough. Because the bass notes are now rather undefined on smaller speakers.
- the guitar arpeggios during the chorus could have been a little louder, they are driving this part and make a lot of sense as a counter melody to the vocals
- the BGVs sound great but I think they could have been just a tad louder during the end bit around 0:40 and the other times around, their level is fine during the chorus though.
These are really just nitpicks as I think you did a really fine job here!
You did a great job with it IMHO. It sounds good to me overall, great tones and balance.
A few things that you might have done to make it even better:
- I think the LPF on the bass is too much, perhaps a high shelf would have been enough. Because the bass notes are now rather undefined on smaller speakers.
- the guitar arpeggios during the chorus could have been a little louder, they are driving this part and make a lot of sense as a counter melody to the vocals
- the BGVs sound great but I think they could have been just a tad louder during the end bit around 0:40 and the other times around, their level is fine during the chorus though.
These are really just nitpicks as I think you did a really fine job here!
"Music, in performance, is a type of sculpture. The air in the performance is sculpted into something." - Frank Zappa
Some air moved here
Some air moved here