02-03-2016, 10:03 PM
Hi!
Nice mix and nice song (props Patrick)!
Love the balance, the voice sits nicely and the overall tonality is very good.
The things I would consider:
1. I would increase the volume of the instruments that sit mostly in the high end like: hihat, cymbals, shaker and I would add some VCC Brit4k drive on the acoustic guitars to make the sparkle a bit more. I just miss a bit the benefit of promoting the high end instruments in building a wider scene.
2. Tune the vocals a bit (sorry Patrick
) but I think it would require Melodyne 4 to do this because the doesn't sound that bad when it comes to pitch but I think that sometimes the the singer holds a note that his voice isn't comfortable with (like "ahhh" in 1:50) so overall tonality and vibrato has to be fixed and I don't know any other tool that could do this well.
3. I would add some more space in the low end for the kick (volume, sidechain compression) some distortion (try Trash
) and maybe some click (but not too much since it's not a metal song 
)
All in all - great work and some small adjustments to be done.
Keep up the great work!
Tested on: Yamaha HS7, Behinger Behritone C50A (mono), Microlab FC330, Brainvawz HM5 in a fully adapted room
Nice mix and nice song (props Patrick)!
Love the balance, the voice sits nicely and the overall tonality is very good.
The things I would consider:
1. I would increase the volume of the instruments that sit mostly in the high end like: hihat, cymbals, shaker and I would add some VCC Brit4k drive on the acoustic guitars to make the sparkle a bit more. I just miss a bit the benefit of promoting the high end instruments in building a wider scene.
2. Tune the vocals a bit (sorry Patrick
) but I think it would require Melodyne 4 to do this because the doesn't sound that bad when it comes to pitch but I think that sometimes the the singer holds a note that his voice isn't comfortable with (like "ahhh" in 1:50) so overall tonality and vibrato has to be fixed and I don't know any other tool that could do this well. 3. I would add some more space in the low end for the kick (volume, sidechain compression) some distortion (try Trash
) and maybe some click (but not too much since it's not a metal song )All in all - great work and some small adjustments to be done.
Keep up the great work!
Tested on: Yamaha HS7, Behinger Behritone C50A (mono), Microlab FC330, Brainvawz HM5 in a fully adapted room
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