31-01-2016, 12:34 AM
Some enjoyable things in your mix, good punch from the bass and drums, and nice horns treatment.
The distortion on the vocals is a bit overbearing though, I think it might have worked better if it wasn't on the whole time. Or if it was more subtle.
The lead guitar at the end is a bit too biting IMHO, but that's probably taste related. And you've missed the fact that it's supposed to fade out at the end, not end up abruptly like this.
But still a nice job!
The distortion on the vocals is a bit overbearing though, I think it might have worked better if it wasn't on the whole time. Or if it was more subtle.
The lead guitar at the end is a bit too biting IMHO, but that's probably taste related. And you've missed the fact that it's supposed to fade out at the end, not end up abruptly like this.
But still a nice job!
"Music, in performance, is a type of sculpture. The air in the performance is sculpted into something." - Frank Zappa
Some air moved here
Some air moved here