I think your mix is pretty good. I don't mind the vocal. I found mixing this myself that all the elements lack mid range and its very hard to get this area right. I think a few Dbs boost on your vocal at about 5kHz would help it cut through a bit better. Also I think a broad frown 
EQ curve over the mix to just lift the mids a little more. Nice job
EQ curve over the mix to just lift the mids a little more. Nice job