21-08-2015, 07:35 AM
Listening on my HD 650's and it's a nice mix. There are some stark changes in volume from section to section. You lose a little energy going into the bridge, I think you blew your proverbial wad on the chorus before it. I think if you fix that, a lot will be resolved. I think some parts might be a little overly compressed, like the acoustic, but I see what kind of mix you're driving for (I presume I do, at least). You're close, just work on some transitional automation to ease into some sections.
Cheers!
Draper
Cheers!
Draper