09-06-2015, 05:20 PM
It's rare that I say this, but I think your snare is too hot. A little on the bright side too. Try adding some low mids to it, and controlling the highs a bit. Also, your low end is a little heavy (it may be a keyboard, or bass) as well as your toms. Try taming those and i think it'll cohere with itself much better. You're not far off at all!
Cheers!
Draper
Cheers!
Draper