29-04-2015, 05:50 PM
Bass sounds much better to me now! 
The 2 solo instrumental parts now sound punchy and clear. Nice!
A few nitpicks still:
1/ I think with the bass not obscuring the low end as much anymore, the lead vocal is a tad too loud though now.
2/ The toms sound too loud vs the snare, I think you could lower their levels by a good 2-3 db.
3/ The snare could be a bit louder in the interlude section (0:22 to 0:40), I suppose the velocity is lower there than during the other instrumental sections, you could perhaps automate it to punch through more during that section.
You're definitely getting there though. I'm starting to really like it!
The 2 solo instrumental parts now sound punchy and clear. Nice!
A few nitpicks still:
1/ I think with the bass not obscuring the low end as much anymore, the lead vocal is a tad too loud though now.
2/ The toms sound too loud vs the snare, I think you could lower their levels by a good 2-3 db.
3/ The snare could be a bit louder in the interlude section (0:22 to 0:40), I suppose the velocity is lower there than during the other instrumental sections, you could perhaps automate it to punch through more during that section.
You're definitely getting there though. I'm starting to really like it!
"Music, in performance, is a type of sculpture. The air in the performance is sculpted into something." - Frank Zappa
Some air moved here
Some air moved here