22-04-2015, 04:43 PM
That's different jorndyt! 
I see that you've made good use of the provided MIDI, that's cool!
Sounds really clean and there's some really nice tones on guitars, bass and keys overall.
One thing though is that it's really bright, a bit harsh even.
I squinted a bit listening on headphones, I was mentally reaching for a high shelf filter to cut that brightness.
The drums and especially the hi-hat sound thin and unnaturally bright.
On the other hand the vocals sound duller in comparison, although there's quite a bit of sibilance, which seems to be coming from a bright reverb for the most part.
For the dullness, I would guess there's some low-mid mud in there that you could cut out a bit.
I'm not fond of the tone of the synth on the right, it's very plain and boring TBH. I would try to add some modulation, something to make it more interesting.
Not sure also why the Rhodes (nice tone BTW, very modern), is split in two for the chord stabs that appear on the right, in the intro for example, it's a bit too much IMHO.
The horns are also a bit tiny in comparison to the drums, I would try to get them thicker if you see what I mean.
Still a cool one, with a different sound that could be made really cool with a few more tweaks.
Keep it up!
I see that you've made good use of the provided MIDI, that's cool!
Sounds really clean and there's some really nice tones on guitars, bass and keys overall.
One thing though is that it's really bright, a bit harsh even.
I squinted a bit listening on headphones, I was mentally reaching for a high shelf filter to cut that brightness.
The drums and especially the hi-hat sound thin and unnaturally bright.
On the other hand the vocals sound duller in comparison, although there's quite a bit of sibilance, which seems to be coming from a bright reverb for the most part.
For the dullness, I would guess there's some low-mid mud in there that you could cut out a bit.
I'm not fond of the tone of the synth on the right, it's very plain and boring TBH. I would try to add some modulation, something to make it more interesting.
Not sure also why the Rhodes (nice tone BTW, very modern), is split in two for the chord stabs that appear on the right, in the intro for example, it's a bit too much IMHO.
The horns are also a bit tiny in comparison to the drums, I would try to get them thicker if you see what I mean.
Still a cool one, with a different sound that could be made really cool with a few more tweaks.
Keep it up!
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